最近练琴少，偶尔创作一下娱乐，请听新歌"Insatious - 贪婪"

mikezhangyl

这是我今天写的一首歌，不是专业的，所以录得很业余。欢迎大家点评，提建议。

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歌词：

Dream, here we go again
It’s so dark in here, I can’t see the light.
I hear a sound and  it’s from afar. In the sky, above the clouds.
All these words, running back in my head, and I can’t stop it now!

Chorus:

Insatious, my desire
For life, for love
Insatious, my faith
For you, for me
Insatious, my soul,
forever, in this realm
Insatious, my soul
I’ll mark it with fire

One more time, here we go again. I feel u inside me now!
The pain inside is killing me, and I can’t make it stop.
Blood of fire dripping from my veins, burning along my path
I wish if this could end right here, but I can’t make you stop

链接：

优酷： http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMTM2MTQ0NTQ5Ng==.html
Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d1BvqIuxoiM
Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/mike-yulin-zhang/insatious

mikezhangyl

自己顶一下！欢迎大家点评，提建议。

天津诚诚

Good,要是中文的更好!

mikezhangyl

天津诚诚 发表于 2015-10-18 21:11
Good,要是中文的更好!

谢谢！我也在往这方面努力，希望能写出中文好歌词。