andy9272000 发表于 2009-12-4 18:59:59

第一次原创,大家随便拍砖~~~

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Traces of Life

Verse 1:
Cigarettes and burning holes
My body’s got no soul
Slide into solitude
All the faces are fading away
It seem so blurry
Alcohol’s in my vein

Verse 2:
I see a thousand million ghosts
Roaming under my nose
Taking away my shoes
Rotten teeth are talking madness
Spitting all over my senses
Is anybody harmless?

Bridge:
Traces of life
Dig up and hide
Who stole my eyes?
Before the night
Please don’t cry
Nobody gonna die

Chorus:
I wish I can go back
But time passes us by
Kill my fantasy, my personality
Whatever you please

Nobody gonna die
But, let me die……


可能听起来有点傻比。

偷了别人几个和弦,和歌词,拼凑一下。只抄一首歌是抄袭,抄10首是研究。

如有雷同,纯属巧合。

andy9272000 发表于 2009-12-4 19:01:45

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Nicedream 发表于 2010-1-12 20:37:21

其实挺好的……不过就像楼主所说的,听起来太耳熟了。

另外,虽然我听的西洋古典和外国摇滚大大多于中国音乐,但是如果我要原创的话,我还是倾向母语。
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